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First novel, first draft I am editing now so please forgive. Chapter OneI sat on the edge of my bed and cried until the tear ducts dried out. I held the pregnancy test in my hand hoping that a line would disappear. I grabbed my phone and called my boyfriend Marcus.“Whaddup girl.”“Bay we need to talk.”“What’s wrong J-”“- Nothing, I mean just come over Marcus.”“I’m on my way to flint for a couple of days, talk to me.”“Marcus, you…See More
Diverse Writers and Artists of Speculative Fiction (DWASF), in conjunction with AfroFuturismNet.com and Black Author Showcase, will present a free workshop on how to develop stories in science fiction, fantasy, and horror.“Creators of Afrofuturism Workshop” will take place at the Long Branch Library at 8800 Garland Avenue, Silver Spring, MD 20901 on October 22 from 11 a.m. to 3 p.m.The event will feature authors …See More
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