"Oronde, were you able to access it. is the link? http://www.sharpebooksonline.com/
It came right up for me.
Give me a few days but I wll look at the chapter. Thanks for the props "my critical eyes" I just read and look for enjoyment.…"
"i would love to see what your critical eyes pull from the first chapter in my "17 to Life". the chapter was left on the critique corner. also visit www.youtube.com/bygincpresents for videos of the rest of the story."
"I think you have a winner. Not sure how many more shorts you have, but you are on to something. I would not mind even working with you. If you want, shoot me an email with an enail address and I will send you and except. Again, I a writer and self…"
"I think, personally you have a winner. I am writing a story that is similar. Ever thought of a collaboration? Its about a brother in the street life who wants to move up. The conflict is with his woman, who is just the opposite. She is truly a…"
"I'm not an editor, so I won't get into the details. I didn't read the story the same way as Usiku, but I think his points are valid. A lot of reading is based on the readers. I read the other comments as well, and as you can see, we…"
"griffstarr, I like the story, and I don’t read much urban fiction except when my man Book Man comes downtown (SW DC at L’Enfant Plaza really) But I am also writing an Urban adventure, so here are my thoughts
Format. Shorten your…"
I appreciate a good artists, from editing to graphic designers, when they all come together and wrap their arms around a good book, you have a million dollar seller. Now,may not make a million (LOL) but doesn;t mean its not worth one. I joined this site (and this group) because I DO love writing and am also starting a professional writing support network (The Writing Well) Anyone interested, please go to my webpage (sharpebooksonline.com) and check it out and lets go. Basically I want us as…See More
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Give me a few days but I wll look at the chapter. Thanks for the props "my critical eyes" I just read and look for enjoyment. I'll be posting my shortly, but don;t mind spending a few minutes suppporting others. Let me know if u still have trouble getting to the website. I haven't seen any new people on the guestbook but the page has been hit quite a bit.
i would love to see what your critical eyes pull from the first chapter in my "17 to Life". the chapter was left on the critique corner. also visit www.youtube.com/bygincpresents for videos of the rest of the story.
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