Not trying to be the next Tyler Perry, David E. Talbert or Angela Burrows Dunlap, just trying to be the NEXT BEST ME! Any playwrights out there? Let's start something BIG! Join up and tell us about your work! If you don't, who will?
"PLease break up your writing! It is too hard to read , with long paragraphs! The stories seem good, but again break up the words!
I love (and write ) short stories, so keep at it, you are a creative writer."
"Your prologue is not catchy at all. it's one big paragraph, with no action.Too much in one lump, with no real action I don't feel your words have a lot of bang to snap my attention. Give some setting to the conversation and use some action…"
"I love the beginning. It caught me , and make me want to read more. I want to read more of your work. I would expand more on the part where you headed back yo the hoos. What were they doing, saying ect.Explain more why you see they are phony. The…"
I am a Christian writer, that has given birth to many short stories, plays, and poems . I am working on my new book, "Psalms From My Broken Heart",I hope to finish this year. My plays have touched many lives and have blessed many, including me! It is awesome to see your words come to life ion stage.
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